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My attempt to write a scritp. I have never done it before. I hope it is funny. If not... Well, I'd appreciate any advice to make it better.


Special thanks to :iconnici-kitty::hug:



Romantically Apocalyptic (c.) :iconalexiuss:

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toeki Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it is really cool. especially the part where snippy corrects himself from saying "friend" and says "follower" instead. that was sweet.
i hope you continue this :)
you have a typo in there, you sometimes type rustlinK instead of rustlinG.
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temarcia Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :hug: I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for pointing out the typo.
Nah, there won't be any continuation. This script is finished. I know, it's rather short, but I don't have any idea of what more could I add. But, if you have some, feel free to share them. : )
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Geli-K Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm trying to write a script, too! Yours is very good. :D
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temarcia Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! : )

Yeah, you could try to write one! There were tips for scriptwriting on the official RA Forum. I don't know, if those are still there (but you could look for it, because it was a great help). Good luck with writing! I'd gladly read your script.
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Geli-K Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No troubles! :D

And thanks! I'll check it out!
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Sol4rpleXus Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Woah, how did I not see this before? This is pure gold! :D Hope it gets filmed.
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temarcia Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
IDK, Dear. xD It has been here for a while. : P Anyway, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. : D And yeah, it'd be super-cool if it get. Thanks! :hug:
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MegLynn92 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student General Artist
LOVE! What a fantastic script! I hope you'll continue writing stories and scripts. You are very good at it. :)
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temarcia Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! You're very kind. : )

I'm really glad, you enjoyed my script. I'm new to script-writing, so every comment is highly appreciated. Thank you for reading, reviewing, and faving. : D

I don't know yet, if there will be anything new for RA fandom (expect from the last chapter of my collaboration with Eight-Of-hearts, that we are working on right now).
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MegLynn92 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student General Artist
:D :dance:
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Xentralus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want to see the film!
That is awesome! xD
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temarcia Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Me too. xD But it's not going to happen anytime soon. Anyway, I was fun to write it.
I'm glad You like it. And thanks for the fav! ; )
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Xentralus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome x3
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alexiuss Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
you should definitely write moaaaaaar
this is winning material. if we ever get our kickstarter to properly fund a good greenscreen studio I'll totally film this!
:D
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temarcia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You for reading my script! You have no idea how flattered I am!
Yeah, I would write more - just keep inspiring me with your delicious comic! :D
Btw, You're doing a great job on dA - replying to RA fans and encouraging them. Keep it up (and all shall be well)! xD
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alexiuss Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
hahahahahah
this is amazing. i love eeet
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Salomea Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Nie jestem pewna czy to o to chodziło, ale w SFX powinno chyba być concrete zamiast cancreat.
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eight0fhearts Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I never knew you could upload .pdfs to deviantart before O_O :D :D

Anyway. Very amusing script and I could picture it all in my head! I've never been a huge Pilot fan but I actually found him very cute in this.

SNIPPY
I said that he hates me. He considered me useless and unworthy of being your fr...
(about to say "friend", corrects himself)
…follower. He's trying to show


Awwww, Snippy! :hug:
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temarcia Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, you can submit prf (as you can see xD). I decided to upload that script in pdf because I thought it would be easier to read that way. You think it was a good choice?
Thanks for your help, again. ; ) I hope everything is correct now (if not, tell me and I'll edit it). If only my English was better... I wouldn't bother you so much. xD
Actually, at first I had idea only for parts with Snippy and Captain, but I realized it would be too static, so I added that scene with Pilot (he's my favorite character after all xD).
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eight0fhearts Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it was a good choice :) It's very easy to read and pleasant to look at.

And you're welcome! It's not a bother for me at all - I'm always glad to help you improve your english.

I'm more of a Snippy fan but you've made me like Pilot a lot more now XD
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temarcia Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"you've made me like Pilot a lot more now XD" - mission accomplished. 8D
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